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I like how you added a voice to the slide and talked about yourself, made it more of a personal slide. I quite like ice cream to - my favourite one would be .......... chocolate with those chocolate lines in it, mmmmm feeling hungry now.
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I like how you added a voice to the slide and talked about yourself, made it more of a personal slide. I quite like ice cream to - my favourite one would be .......... chocolate with those chocolate lines in it, mmmmm feeling hungry now.
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